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评级Ratings
神学性Theology
评鉴模型按公开标准评出Rated by our review model against a public standard
★★★★★★★★★★8.3(满分 10) (out of 10)
神学性高于 46% 的诗歌Higher theology rating than 46% of songs
「我」是在向神回应,还是围绕自己展开?Is the “I” responding to God, or centered on itself?
「我」是在向神说话、回应神的拯救:站在神面前、献上一切、颂赞祂的名,不是围绕自己展开。
盼望、依据、拯救的来源在哪里?Where do hope, grounding and salvation come from?
盼望和力量的来源在神——祂改变了我、折断我罪的锁链、扶持跌倒的我、拯救了我。
删掉「神」的词,还剩下什么?Remove the words about God: what is left?
删掉神的词后,「You broke my chains of sin」「Now that You've saved me」仍只有神能说出口,不是自我激励或情绪疗愈。
神学表达清晰度Theological Clarity
说得清不清楚:神是谁、人是谁、关系是否明确Is it clear who God is, who we are, and how we relate?
10.0 / 10
「你」在每一段都有明写:my Saviour、my God、Lord、You've saved me,神学指向清楚,无需猜。「You are the strength inside of me」「the light that lets me see」属诗意比喻,但有上下文,不构成含糊或误导。故本项不扣分,得 10.0。
神学丰富度Theological Richness
加分项:讲清神是谁、做了什么、有经文根据、有深度Bonus: says clearly who God is and what he has done, with scriptural grounding and depth
+1.3 / 3
R3讲到神一件具体作为One specific act of God 「You broke my chains of sin」讲到神一件具体的作为:折断罪的锁链、施行拯救。
R5有福音的线索Traces the gospel 「Lord I give You my all」福音线索完整:罪得释放→「You've saved me」→献上自己的回应。
R9明写基督或圣灵Names Christ or the Spirit 「my Saviour」歌词明写基督的身份与作为——救主,且祂拯救了我。
Score = average of the three parts × 0.7 + richness (out of 10; stars = score ÷ 2). If Biblical Accuracy is 4.0 or lower, the score is capped at 4.0. The highest score is 9.6 — no perfect 10. Full standard
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投屏用:一屏一段,每屏最多 6 行。大家都能改,每次修改都留下版本,可以恢复。For projection: one verse per slide, at most 6 lines. Anyone can edit; every edit is kept and can be restored.
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