Fear Not

• B1 简化得不够严谨Oversimplified, not wrong 「Stand still and believe」简化信心的回应，但不算错
• B2 措辞可能被误解Wording open to misreading 「I won't let you drown」可能被误解为神应许不受任何伤害

• F1 整段只讲人、没回到神A section about us that never returns to God 「When a cry's in your throat」讲人的困境感受，未回到神
• F1 整段只讲人、没回到神A section about us that never returns to God 「So get up, get on your way」讲人的行动，未回到神
• F1 整段只讲人、没回到神A section about us that never returns to God 「When the questions start arising」讲人的疑问，未回到神
• F3 放进世俗歌也成立Would work as a secular song 「When life piles up」段落放入励志歌原样成立，且无明写神
• F3 放进世俗歌也成立Would work as a secular song 「Let me show you what I see」段落放入励志歌原样成立，且无明写神
• F3 放进世俗歌也成立Would work as a secular song 「Remember all I told you」段落放入情歌/亲情歌原样成立，且无明写神
• F4 整首围绕我的需要Built around my needs 「You can't dream too big for Me」全曲围绕人的恐惧与梦想，神只是帮助者

这首歌的最终对象是谁？Who is the song finally addressed to?

听众的安慰、梦想与得胜；神（若存在）只是帮助者

「我」是在向神回应，还是围绕自己展开？Is the “I” responding to God, or centered on itself?

「我」是安慰者/承诺者，未明写是神；听众是被安慰的对象

盼望、依据、拯救的来源在哪里？Where do hope, grounding and salvation come from?

说话者的应许与爱；但因说话者身份不明，来源可落在人或自我激励

删掉「神」的词，还剩下什么？Remove the words about God: what is left?

删去任何隐含的神，只剩励志、情绪疗愈与成功宣言

• C2 意象缺上下文Imagery lacks context 「Hold on tightly to the promise」『promise』抽象，缺上下文
• C4 一半以上像世俗歌Mostly reads as secular 「Fear not」半数以上段落放进世俗歌原样成立，且无明写神

十条都没有命中。None of the ten checkpoints met.

没命中：Not met: 两种以上具体属性Two or more of God’s attributes、, 四种以上具体属性Four or more of God’s attributes、, 讲到神一件具体作为One specific act of God、, 两件以上不同作为Two or more acts of God、, 有福音的线索Traces the gospel、, 转述一段经文Echoes a passage、, 转述两段以上经文Echoes two or more passages、, 信仰里的张力或深度Holds tension or depth of faith、, 明写基督或圣灵Names Christ or the Spirit、, 明写三一中两位以上Names two or more persons of the Trinity