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JS敬拜团

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神学性Theology
评鉴模型按公开标准评出Rated by our review model against a public standard
8.3（满分 10） (out of 10)

神学性高于 23% 的「奉献」诗歌Higher theology rating than 23% of “Offering” songs

以耶和华为中心的献身短诗，指向清楚，内容偏简洁。
合乎圣经Biblical Accuracy10.0
神学焦点Theological Focus10.0
表达清晰度Clarity10.0
丰富度Richness0.3 / 2
评分明细Score breakdown内容正确 8.0 / 8 ＋ 丰富度 0.3 / 2 ＝ 8.3Correctness 8.0 / 8 + Richness 0.3 / 2 = 8.3

合乎圣经Biblical Accuracy

真不真：陈述是否与圣经一致Is it true? Do its claims agree with Scripture?
10.0 / 10
全歌没有命中任何扣分条。措辞「宽阔之地」「死荫幽谷」「圣所」「求告祢的名」都在诗篇的用法范围内，属于正统范围内的经文借用，没有把圣经未应许的唱成普遍应许，也没有对神、人、救恩的错误陈述，与使徒信经、尼西亚信经无冲突。

神学焦点Theological Focus

向着谁：注意力、盼望和敬拜最终指向谁Toward whom? Where attention, hope and worship finally point
10.0 / 10
整首歌最终指向耶和华：祂是「一生的福分」，是喜乐与不离弃的来源，人的回应是求告、侍奉、荣耀、献上。第一人称虽多，但「我」始终在神面前说话，「我心有满足的喜乐」一句也立刻回到「耶和华从不曾离弃我」，没有让注意力停在自己身上。删去神的词后剩下的不是自我激励或成功宣言，因此不构成以人为中心的偏斜。
这首歌的最终对象是谁？Who is the song finally addressed to?
耶和华。全歌的对象是圣经中自我启示的神，末句落在「一生侍奉祢、一生荣耀祢、一生献上所有为祢」。
「我」是在向神回应，还是围绕自己展开？Is the “I” responding to God, or centered on itself?
「我」是在神面前宣认与回应：「我心有满足的喜乐」「我要在祢圣所求告祢的名」，是向神说话，不是围绕自己展开。
盼望、依据、拯救的来源在哪里？Where do hope, grounding and salvation come from?
盼望与喜乐的来源明写为耶和华自己——「耶和华是我一生的福分」「耶和华从不曾离弃我」，不是我的信心或努力。
删掉「神」的词，还剩下什么？Remove the words about God: what is left?
删去神的词后不成立：福分、满足的喜乐、死荫幽谷中的不离弃、圣所与求告名，都只能指神，剩下的不是自我激励或情绪疗愈。

神学表达清晰度Theological Clarity

说得清不清楚：神是谁、人是谁、关系是否明确Is it clear who God is, who we are, and how we relate?
10.0 / 10
神学指向很清楚：首句就明写「耶和华」，第二段的「祢」承接同一对象，并以「圣所」「求告祢的名」进一步限定，读者不会误解为泛指的「你」。全篇没有抽象难辨的意象或读不出指向的关键句，语言简单但神学指向不含糊，故清晰度不扣分。

神学丰富度Theological Richness

歌词有没有讲清神是谁、做了什么、福音、经文和信仰里的深度。下面十条，命中一条加一点，命中七条拿满 2 分；每条都要引歌词原句。内容简单的歌不扣分，只是这里加得少。Does the lyric say clearly who God is and what he has done, trace the gospel, echo Scripture, or hold the depth of faith? Each of the ten checkpoints below adds a little; seven earns the full 2 points. Every hit must quote the lyric. Simple songs lose nothing — they just gain less here.
+0.3 / 2
  • R8 信仰里的张力或深度Holds tension or depth of faith 「耶和华从不曾离弃我」在「死荫幽谷」的处境中仍宣认神的信实，显出苦难中信靠的张力。

没命中：Not met: 两种以上具体属性Two or more of God’s attributes、, 四种以上具体属性Four or more of God’s attributes、, 讲到神一件具体作为One specific act of God、, 两件以上不同作为Two or more acts of God、, 有福音的线索Traces the gospel、, 转述一段经文Echoes a passage、, 转述两段以上经文Echoes two or more passages、, 明写基督或圣灵Names Christ or the Spirit、, 明写三一中两位以上Names two or more persons of the Trinity

经文Scripture
  • 诗篇 16:5Psalms 16:5
  • 诗篇 16:11Psalms 16:11
  • 诗篇 23:4Psalms 23:4
总分 = 内容正确（三小项平均 × 0.8，满 8 分）＋ 丰富度（满 2 分），满分 10，星 = 分 ÷ 2；合乎圣经 ≤ 4.0 时总分最高 4.0；最高分 9.6，不给满分。完整标准
Score = correctness (average of the three parts × 0.8, up to 8) + richness (up to 2), out of 10; stars = score ÷ 2. If Biblical Accuracy is 4.0 or lower, the score is capped at 4.0. The highest score is 9.6 — no perfect 10. Full standard

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    投屏用：一屏一段，每屏最多 6 行。大家都能改，每次修改都留下版本，可以恢复。For projection: one verse per slide, at most 6 lines. Anyone can edit; every edit is kept and can be restored.

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    空一行 = 换一屏。一屏最多 6 行：超过 6 行的段会平均切成两屏（7 行 = 4+3，8 行 = 4+4，9 行 = 5+4……），想换个切法就自己在合适的地方空一行。A blank line starts a new slide. Max 6 lines per slide: longer verses are split evenly (7 lines = 4+3, 8 = 4+4, 9 = 5+4…). Add a blank line yourself to split elsewhere.

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