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做我自己

约书亚乐团Joshua Band

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神学性Theology
评鉴模型按公开标准评出Rated by our review model against a public standard
8.4（满分 10） (out of 10)

神学性高于 64% 的「赞美」诗歌Higher theology rating than 64% of “Praise” songs

创造与身份主题，指向清楚但偏自我接纳，内容较简单。
评分明细Score breakdown合乎圣经 10.0 · 焦点 9.0 · 清晰度 9.5 · 丰富度 +1.7Biblical 10.0 · Focus 9.0 · Clarity 9.5 · Richness +1.7

合乎圣经Biblical Accuracy

真不真：陈述是否与圣经一致Is it true? Do its claims agree with Scripture?
10.0 / 10
歌词未把圣经没应许的当作普遍应许，也未对神、人、救恩作出明显错误陈述：创造、天父的爱、圣灵引导都在正统范围内。光合作用、断食等属自然与养生描写，不是神学陈述，不构成错谬，故本项不扣分。

神学焦点Theological Focus

向着谁：注意力、盼望和敬拜最终指向谁Toward whom? Where attention, hope and worship finally point
9.0 / 10
最终对象是创造天地、被称为天父、赐下圣灵的神，结尾也归向对神的赞美，整体未把神当成达成目标的工具。但歌曲重心常在「我的价值与自我接纳」，副歌「做我自己 爱我自己」，且「不比较就不会扼杀自信」把自信依据部分放在人自己的做法上，故记一处 F2，焦点略偏人。
  • F2 盼望落在人自己Hope rests on ourselves 「不比较 就不会扼杀自信」把自信的依据放在人「不比较」的做法上，来源落在人自己
这首歌的最终对象是谁？Who is the song finally addressed to?
最终对象是创造天地、被称为天父、并赐下圣灵的三一神；但歌曲的落脚点大量放在「我自己」的身份与价值上。
「我」是在向神回应，还是围绕自己展开？Is the “I” responding to God, or centered on itself?
「我」主要是被造的承受者，向神说话、因受造而被肯定；但多处「我」在讲自我价值、感受与自我接纳（做我自己、爱我自己）。
盼望、依据、拯救的来源在哪里？Where do hope, grounding and salvation come from?
价值与盼望的依据最终在神的创造和天父的爱（「我价值不是来自我努力」「创造我的是祢」），不在自己；唯「不比较就不会扼杀自信」把自信的依据部分放在人的做法上。
删掉「神」的词，还剩下什么？Remove the words about God: what is left?
删去神/祢/天父/圣灵后，创造、天父之爱、「创造我的是祢」等段整体不成立；但副歌「做我自己爱我自己」与光合作用、断食等句会剩下自我肯定与养生励志。

神学表达清晰度Theological Clarity

说得清不清楚：神是谁、人是谁、关系是否明确Is it clear who God is, who we are, and how we relate?
9.5 / 10
各段的「祢」都由「创造了地」「天父」「圣灵」「创造我的是祢」「神所造的」明写出来，神学指向清楚，无 C1、C3、C4。唯「我里面蕴藏着永恒的奥秘」较抽象，其神学指向（灵魂、永生、神形象）可有不同理解，记一处 C2。
  • C2 意象缺上下文Imagery lacks context 「我里面 蕴藏着永恒的奥秘」抽象词缺上下文，指灵魂、永生或神形象可有不同理解

神学丰富度Theological Richness

加分项：讲清神是谁、做了什么、有经文根据、有深度Bonus: says clearly who God is and what he has done, with scriptural grounding and depth
+1.7 / 3
  • R3 讲到神一件具体作为One specific act of God 「祢造完地 也造我生命」讲到神创造（造地、造人）这一具体作为
  • R6 转述一段经文Echoes a passage 「祢创造天 也创造了地」明显转述创世记 1:1「起初，神创造天地」
  • R7 转述两段以上经文Echoes two or more passages 「我受造充满 祢精心设计」另引诗篇 139:13-14「我受造奇妙可畏」，两段不同经文
  • R9 明写基督或圣灵Names Christ or the Spirit 「圣灵规划了我作息」明写圣灵的名字并其引导作为
经文Scripture
  • 创世记 1:1Genesis 1:1
  • 诗篇 139:13-14Psalms 139:13-14
  • 创世记 1:31Genesis 1:31
总分 = 三小项平均 × 0.7 + 丰富度（满分 10，星 = 分 ÷ 2）；合乎圣经 ≤ 4.0 时总分最高 4.0；最高分 9.6，不给满分。完整标准
Score = average of the three parts × 0.7 + richness (out of 10; stars = score ÷ 2). If Biblical Accuracy is 4.0 or lower, the score is capped at 4.0. The highest score is 9.6 — no perfect 10. Full standard

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    投屏用：一屏一段，每屏最多 6 行。大家都能改，每次修改都留下版本，可以恢复。For projection: one verse per slide, at most 6 lines. Anyone can edit; every edit is kept and can be restored.

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    空一行 = 换一屏。一屏最多 6 行：超过 6 行的段会平均切成两屏（7 行 = 4+3，8 行 = 4+4，9 行 = 5+4……），想换个切法就自己在合适的地方空一行。A blank line starts a new slide. Max 6 lines per slide: longer verses are split evenly (7 lines = 4+3, 8 = 4+4, 9 = 5+4…). Add a blank line yourself to split elsewhere.

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