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评级Ratings
神学性Theology
评鉴模型按公开标准评出Rated by our review model against a public standard
★★★★★★★★★★9.4（满分 10） (out of 10)
神学性高于 79% 的诗歌Higher theology rating than 79% of songs
真不真：陈述是否与圣经一致Is it true? Do its claims agree with Scripture?
10.0 / 10
全篇无与圣经相违之处。「死阴的幽谷」「大水不能漫过我身、火焰不能烧着我身」是对诗篇23:4与以赛亚书43:2的化用，且下一句「因主与我同经水火」表明是同经苦难的同在，而非无灾无难的保证；「恩典够用」「平安无人能夺走」也在林后12:9、约14:27的正统理解内。用词简化但不构成错误陈述，故不记 B 类。
神学焦点Theological Focus
向着谁：注意力、盼望和敬拜最终指向谁Toward whom? Where attention, hope and worship finally point
10.0 / 10
四个问题的答案都指向主：对象是主耶稣，叙述中心是主的牵手、保守、赐恩、同经水火，盼望来源不是自己的信心或努力。情感虽浓、第一人称虽多，但每一段都落回主，没有一段只讲自己而不回到神，因此不记 F 类。
这首歌的最终对象是谁？Who is the song finally addressed to?
主耶稣——整首歌的对象是那位牵我手、赐平安恩典、与我同经水火的主。
「我」是在向神回应，还是围绕自己展开？Is the “I” responding to God, or centered on itself?
「我」是在向主述说、感恩、作见证，不是围绕自己展开；每段经历都落回主。
盼望、依据、拯救的来源在哪里？Where do hope, grounding and salvation come from?
盼望与保守的来源全在主的同在、主爱、主的恩典与平安，不在自己。
删掉「神」的词，还剩下什么？Remove the words about God: what is left?
删掉「主」字后剩下的不是自我激励或情绪疗愈，而是无法成立的句子，核心离不了主。
神学表达清晰度Theological Clarity
说得清不清楚：神是谁、人是谁、关系是否明确Is it clear who God is, who we are, and how we relate?
10.0 / 10
「主耶稣」「主」在整首歌词中反复明写，神学指向毫不含糊；「死阴的幽谷」「活水」「水火」等意象有清楚的圣经出处，不产生歧义。没有一段放进情歌、励志歌里原样成立，也没有需要靠上下文猜测的对象，故不记 C 类。
神学丰富度Theological Richness
歌词有没有讲清神是谁、做了什么、福音、经文和信仰里的深度。下面十条，命中一条加一点，命中七条拿满 2 分；每条都要引歌词原句。内容简单的歌不扣分，只是这里加得少。Does the lyric say clearly who God is and what he has done, trace the gospel, echo Scripture, or hold the depth of faith? Each of the ten checkpoints below adds a little; seven earns the full 2 points. Every hit must quote the lyric. Simple songs lose nothing — they just gain less here.
+1.4 / 2
R5有福音的线索Traces the gospel 「主赐我恩典一定够我用」有线索：死阴幽谷干渴的无助→主赐恩典与活水→感谢主大能保守的回应。
R6转述一段经文Echoes a passage 「大水不能漫过我身」明显转述以赛亚书43:2「水必不漫过你……火焰也不着在你身上」。
R7转述两段以上经文Echoes two or more passages 「主赐我平安无人能夺走」除赛43:2外，还化用约翰福音14:27主所赐的平安。
R8信仰里的张力或深度Holds tension or depth of faith 「因主与我同经水火」在苦难水火中仍信靠主的同在，有哀歌式的张力与深度。
R9明写基督或圣灵Names Christ or the Spirit 「主耶稣牵我的手」明写基督的名字「主耶稣」并唱出他的陪伴作为。
没命中：Not met: 两种以上具体属性Two or more of God’s attributes、, 四种以上具体属性Four or more of God’s attributes、, 讲到神一件具体作为One specific act of God、, 两件以上不同作为Two or more acts of God、, 明写三一中两位以上Names two or more persons of the Trinity
Score = correctness (average of the three parts × 0.8, up to 8) + richness (up to 2), out of 10; stars = score ÷ 2. If Biblical Accuracy is 4.0 or lower, the score is capped at 4.0. The highest score is 9.6 — no perfect 10. Full standard
异议Objections
还没有人对这首歌的评鉴提出异议。觉得哪里评得不对，点「我不同意」写下理由和经文，大家可以支持或不支持。No one has objected to this review yet. If you think something is wrong, tap “I disagree” and give your reasons and Scripture; others can support it or not.
异议不逐条裁决，大家自己看。评分标准修订时会参考支持多的异议，然后所有歌按新标准重评，不单独改某一首。Objections aren’t ruled on one by one — read them and judge for yourself. When the rating standard is revised, well-supported objections are taken into account and every song is re-rated under the new standard; we don’t adjust individual songs.评分标准Rating standard
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投屏用：一屏一段，每屏最多 6 行。大家都能改，每次修改都留下版本，可以恢复。For projection: one verse per slide, at most 6 lines. Anyone can edit; every edit is kept and can be restored.
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